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There's a girl
Standing in the crowd

No one sees
And no one cares

The parents slap
The dog bites
The children laugh
The teacher ignores

This sad, sad little girl
Will stand there in the crowd

All alone
Standing tall

Until the very end
Because

She is strong
Doing poetry in writing class and this is what happened
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asayake-hime Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Yes
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Student Writer
Beautiful and straight to the point.
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AkeAkatsuki Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
Thanks! :)
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Student Writer
No problem.
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RetardHomeless Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
Wow, now i am all teary eyed! Youre poem reminded me of myself when i was little. Simple poem but with so strong message. Keep up the god work! :')
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AkeAkatsuki Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
Awww thank you!! I'm surprised it caused such a strong reaction, but happy too :)
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